Alex, i think your essay should deserve 12/12. Your word choice is great, amazing actually. there are words that i don't even know, and they sound really cool, that makes your essay interesting to read. your writing in this doesn't seems like an informal writing as I have read other people essays.The organization is really details and clear. You have gotten 5 paragraphs, which helps me a lot in understanding yours. I am not sure about the grammar because i am obviously not good t it, but your essay sounds very well, maybe there aren't any mistake after all. good job, (me phuc. you lun)
Alex, i think your essay should deserve 12/12. Your word choice is great, amazing actually. there are words that i don't even know, and they sound really cool, that makes your essay interesting to read. your writing in this doesn't seems like an informal writing as I have read other people essays.The organization is really details and clear. You have gotten 5 paragraphs, which helps me a lot in understanding yours. I am not sure about the grammar because i am obviously not good t it, but your essay sounds very well, maybe there aren't any mistake after all. good job, (me phuc. you lun)
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan for your kind words. :))
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