Friday, January 14, 2011

Vanilla Hills Publicity Poster First Draft

2 comments:

  1. You should lose the green background around the information. You want the content to be as prominent as possible.

    Where the black text overlaps the image it becomes difficult to read.

    On your logo the 'V' and the 'H' are not clear

    you have not mentioned the names of the rides: 'high flyer' and 'tunbler'.

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  2. I think your poster is very good! :]
    the focal point is very good. i really like your font

    I think you can make the green background thinner. Your picture is a little blurry.
    What do you mean by "We did, have you?" ?

    you can make your title larger.

    Other than that, well done Alex! ;)

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